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Dear David,

How time flies! It is almost one year since I studied in senior high school. I’m glad to share with you my experience in the new school.

I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge, which makes me very happy. Most excitingly, I’ve made great progress in English. But I am not good at physics and I’ll have to work harder in the next term.

In this school, I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely. After class, I often discuss difficult problems and even share my happiness and sorrow with them. In my spare time, I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities, especially ball games. Therefore, I’ve grown taller and stronger.

What about your school life? Would you like to share it with me? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

解析

試題分析：本文是一篇寫給朋友的回信，主要講述自己的高一生活。題目中首先可以抓住這篇文章的中心：給朋友寫一封講述“我”高一生活的回信。然后根據題中給出的小提示，進行文章的段落劃分，讓文章有一定的邏輯感。如本文主要分為以下幾個部分：第一部分總體講述自己的感受；第二部分講述學習生活中的感受；第三部分講述在學校中的課余生活。本篇作文結構完整，簡潔明了，用詞較為新穎，句型結構完整，值得學生借鑒。